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Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv143yr
2021-06-12 05:04

aaahhhh!!!~ I want more!!! I want more!!! I want more chapter!!!~😣 The FL not too Overpower but average all rounded, all five childrens are so talented. It describe how she handle problem and process to make money with detail but not so boring detail, not like those FL whose make money as easy as breathing. And I really tired with novel who FL say cliched word like 'I will take revenge to those wronged me' or 'I will not let take those mistake again' or 'I will take back what its mine'...etc.

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Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv14

Septembersapphira
SeptembersapphiraLv10

Spoiler Alert: Before anyone reads this, please take note that the bigwigs father is NOT the ML. This was so frustrating to read. I wasted MTLing 200 chapters just for the MC to end up with another guy who wasnt even mentioned in the summary 😑😑😑😑😑

trick_or_treat
trick_or_treatLv6

What?! I thought that she would end up with the kids father bc the description kinda showed it that way 😳 If possible can you send me the raw? Rn I havent found a review with the raws yet that has not been deleted or something πŸ₯²

Septembersapphira:Spoiler Alert: Before anyone reads this, please take note that the bigwigs father is NOT the ML. This was so frustrating to read. I wasted MTLing 200 chapters just for the MC to end up with another guy who wasnt even mentioned in the summary 😑😑😑😑😑
Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv14

yeah, in some point there will be tears jerking scene with the main ML in life and death situation. 😒 well, I am not disappoint with ML, it just why this father's big shoots lose with this kind of ML because he not decisive enough. But it will still happy ending. ( well, I'm not sure what the ending is, in MTL the ending not completed yet).

Septembersapphira:Spoiler Alert: Before anyone reads this, please take note that the bigwigs father is NOT the ML. This was so frustrating to read. I wasted MTLing 200 chapters just for the MC to end up with another guy who wasnt even mentioned in the summary 😑😑😑😑😑
nureha
nurehaLv4

I'm not sure if what I read is the same one as this. but I remember that the big shot's father was injured due to a mission and is a soldier(?) and there was also a character in the novel where there is a man who has face blindness and is only able to recognize the FL, so, was he the person FL ended up with?

Leni_Purwanti:yeah, in some point there will be tears jerking scene with the main ML in life and death situation. 😒 well, I am not disappoint with ML, it just why this father's big shoots lose with this kind of ML because he not decisive enough. But it will still happy ending. ( well, I'm not sure what the ending is, in MTL the ending not completed yet).
Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv14

Spoiler!!!! Yes

nureha:I'm not sure if what I read is the same one as this. but I remember that the big shot's father was injured due to a mission and is a soldier(?) and there was also a character in the novel where there is a man who has face blindness and is only able to recognize the FL, so, was he the person FL ended up with?
nureha
nurehaLv4

whaaaat. she ended up with the face blindness guy? I totally thought that she would be with the father of the guys. the last time I remembered reading the novel it was close to when they caught a criminal and the ml helped saved the fl. so I thought the probability of them ending up together is close to 100% if not a total 100%(including the fact that he did show up on the synopsis). I'm sorry to the fb(face blindness) guy that it didn't really click in me that they even had a chance. most ml persona aren't really in the category belonging to the gentle type and he the fb guy (in my opinion) is gentle. soooo, what an unexpected surprise.

Leni_Purwanti:Spoiler!!!! Yes
Leni_Purwanti
Leni_PurwantiLv14

I thought like that too at first.πŸ˜„

nureha:whaaaat. she ended up with the face blindness guy? I totally thought that she would be with the father of the guys. the last time I remembered reading the novel it was close to when they caught a criminal and the ml helped saved the fl. so I thought the probability of them ending up together is close to 100% if not a total 100%(including the fact that he did show up on the synopsis). I'm sorry to the fb(face blindness) guy that it didn't really click in me that they even had a chance. most ml persona aren't really in the category belonging to the gentle type and he the fb guy (in my opinion) is gentle. soooo, what an unexpected surprise.
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ColdPoTAhTow
ColdPoTAhTowLv4

Yessssss! I really hoped that she would end up with the face blind guy because why notπŸ€·β€β™€οΈ

spicy_bean
spicy_beanLv1

is the blind faced guy the biological father of the kids?????

Leni_Purwanti:Spoiler!!!! Yes
Takiko12
Takiko12Lv14

True, but.....admit it, the ML was much better than the Father of the five kids.

Septembersapphira:Spoiler Alert: Before anyone reads this, please take note that the bigwigs father is NOT the ML. This was so frustrating to read. I wasted MTLing 200 chapters just for the MC to end up with another guy who wasnt even mentioned in the summary 😑😑😑😑😑
Takiko12
Takiko12Lv14

I want more chapters about the FL and ML in modern timeline. Their life together from the past was like the story of Romeo and Juliet. So sweet and romantic.

archita_babu
archita_babuLv11

in the beginning the ji guy doesn't show that much ml aura....but towards the end fl and ji guy will make a very cute n funny couple....but it will be for very short time...at that time we can feel how much they love each other... i think the overall story revolves around the 5 kids....only during the end chapters there will be a bit of romance i was honestly frustrated and sad for the kids' daddy...but later we can understand that the ji guy is better

nureha:whaaaat. she ended up with the face blindness guy? I totally thought that she would be with the father of the guys. the last time I remembered reading the novel it was close to when they caught a criminal and the ml helped saved the fl. so I thought the probability of them ending up together is close to 100% if not a total 100%(including the fact that he did show up on the synopsis). I'm sorry to the fb(face blindness) guy that it didn't really click in me that they even had a chance. most ml persona aren't really in the category belonging to the gentle type and he the fb guy (in my opinion) is gentle. soooo, what an unexpected surprise.
Valkyrie_Mia
Valkyrie_MiaLv15

Same I was disappointed in the end. tbh I did not JB at all. he was way to forced onto us. I liked SQ way better. JB has that condition of his I feel the only reason. he even likes her is cuz she is the only one he can see. he doesn't give anyone else the time of day cuz he can't see them. The whole thing between them was too forced.

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