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2023-09-09 08:15

The first 40 chapters was good, the translation for those chapters were good too but then from chapter 41 and later it just goes down hill from there. Like seriously, I paid for those later chapters so I at least expected those chapters to be proof read or at least the translator would go back to edit and fix those mistakes. In every single chapter there would be mistakes & the mistakes the characters pronouns. With those mistakes sometimes I would get confuse with who’s the characters were referring to. The novel story itself is interesting and good so far but with the mistakes that you have to read through in every single chapter it just ruins it & confusing for the readers. I ended up having to give up reading this novel cause of it. I noticed that a lot of the newer novels thats release on here, alot of them don’t have any proof reading before they publish those chapters and they don’t even bother to go back to edit those mistakes whether it’s grammar or characters pronouns mistakes. Readers pay to unlock those chapters so they at least expect the chapters to be proof read or the translator would at least go back to edit and fix those mistakes.

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