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2023-07-01 16:28

dropped chapter 55 if iIpay to read a book I'd expect it to be proof read before published and I'd also like to think that Author or translator would take on advice from their readershere that doesn't happen constant mistakes of him herconstant merging of dialogue so unable to tell who is talking without having to figure it outyes translation is alot better than a machine translation which makes the VERY MINOR BUT CONSTANT MISTAKES MORE NOTICEABLE shame story has potential

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seen people comment of mistakes in chapter and it's been almost a month not changed

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