Review Detail of Nikkie_LZ in Chronicles of Sprigladel: Tale of Two Tales
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The novel has a very intriguing world building. I am amaze of the author's mind because all setting the author created is well done. Can I crack your mind, author, and see how all the imagination comes to you? Cuz' I want some of that. The writing is stable. My only suggestion is for the author to play more around with the size of paragraphs. I think that would update your story so much. The few characters we have met are well-designed. Conclusion, a worthy read. Try it, you might like it!
Chronicles of Sprigladel: Tale of Two Tales
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Thank you so much for reading! Yes others have told me about the paragraphs being a bit too long, and I've realized that especially since not everyone reads on a computer, some people may read on the App, so I have to start splitting into smaller paragraphs for readability. The next chapter and onward will be easier on the eyes so look forward to it! n_n
Right. You can have long paragraphs but make sure you are mixing the paragraphs sizes. Yes, looking forwards next chapters!
evilmunky45:Thank you so much for reading! Yes others have told me about the paragraphs being a bit too long, and I've realized that especially since not everyone reads on a computer, some people may read on the App, so I have to start splitting into smaller paragraphs for readability. The next chapter and onward will be easier on the eyes so look forward to it! n_n