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croixgolden
croixgoldenLv153yr
2021-07-16 01:14

all i want to say, what really turn me off from the novel was the three way relationship, i think the novel started good but became boring. unpleasant things like what happened off screen with one of heroin fall in mind control under the priest

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Noel_Elitia
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TRY READING WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

Fk off, I'm so sick of seeing this spammer, I even wasted time trying that novel and it's absolutely terrible and reads like the author enjoys bullying little girls to the point they break and shoot up a school. (No surprise though I guess since the author enjoys spamming to get views on other peoples novels.)

Noel_Elitia:TRY READING WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED
Yokoyokai
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Well, promoting your book in other book's review without the author's consent is already rude enough, so I'm with ya

Ototsu_Yume:Fk off, I'm so sick of seeing this spammer, I even wasted time trying that novel and it's absolutely terrible and reads like the author enjoys bullying little girls to the point they break and shoot up a school. (No surprise though I guess since the author enjoys spamming to get views on other peoples novels.)
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