Review Detail of SarcasticPerson in Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse
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This novel is decent but lacks in many aspects. Updating stability is good since it's still new. First three chapters is becoming info dump in my opinion. World background is ok I guess. Writing quality is decent but needs improvement well I should read the first novel of this since it's more worst than this one. And are you chinese man? don't use pingyin when naming your characters and just use american names or other names that are exclusive in your country.
Dimensional Store System In Apocalypse
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I agree with you on this but I'm the type who gives review even if I don't like it. I'll read and judge it again if I see some improvements.
SKY702:I see some of your points but i dont agree. Firstly YES the first 3 chapters are info dump as well as some background plot but the author made so it is still entertaining Secondly the writing quality is VERY GOOD If you call this decent oh boy you should really read a majority of the books here Thirdly lets be honest no matter what the nationality of the author almost all the books here have asian named characters so i dont see any problem personally and its allso the first time i see it being brought up after all the author wrote the book that way who am i to change it In conclusion, i understood what you ment but i don’t think its right at all and the reviews that you gave was very unfair, but anyway that’s your opinion, i just think that we have to be careful with the work of others [img=recommend]
I see some of your points but i dont agree. Firstly YES the first 3 chapters are info dump as well as some background plot but the author made so it is still entertaining Secondly the writing quality is VERY GOOD If you call this decent oh boy you should really read a majority of the books here Thirdly lets be honest no matter what the nationality of the author almost all the books here have asian named characters so i dont see any problem personally and its allso the first time i see it being brought up after all the author wrote the book that way who am i to change it In conclusion, i understood what you ment but i don’t think its right at all and the reviews that you gave was very unfair, but anyway that’s your opinion, i just think that we have to be careful with the work of others [img=recommend]