See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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This Novel Is Tr@sh!!! Why? I will explain why. The MC isn't a beta MC! How can we, tr@sh readers, not have a beta MC! Why does it have to be an Alpha MC? This isn't a harem! How can we, h0rny readers, have to read this novel with no harem! I have heard from the author himself in discord that he would at most have 2 or 3 love interest for Allen Walker. He also said that the romance wouldn't be pokemon style- gotta bed them all. Thus, it is tr@sh! This novel doesn't ntr, r@pe, inc3st, and ped0phili@? How come the author doesn't want to entertain us d3generate readers? I am not lying with my review since I have heard from the author himself. And yes, I am being what my name is when describing this novel as tr@sh since I prefer the novel to be that way. But other than the part where I describe the novel as tr@sh, I am not being who I am with the rest of the review.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I like how the author didn't made the first chapter an info dump, which is the mistake of most authors. The author has a Sense of humour and I like it. Writing quality is great. character design is good I guess but I still don't know considering there aren't that many chapters. World background is yet to be introduced. Story development is smooth. The actions are detailed but is not boring. The only problem of this novel is updating stability. There are only 1 chapter and the author doesn't update daily or every two days. All in all a good novel with a lot of potential.

I agree with you on this but I'm the type who gives review even if I don't like it. I'll read and judge it again if I see some improvements.

Interesting. The writing quality is decent. The description is detailed at the same time not: just balanced. Character development is good. The only problem is updating stability. You should update every day. All in all a good novel to read.

This is so good that I'm not being sarcastic anymore! The action of the character is very descriptive but also explains his emotion on it. The first chapter and later chapters are well written with good quality writing. I'm sure that this novel will be popular if sci-fi is your cup of tea.

Now I see some improvements. the actions are more detailed and described and I'm starting to love this novel! keep up the good work! I'll change my review if I read chapter 10 so i can judge it again.

I suggest you add the world building in auxiliary chapter if you don't want info dump