Review Detail of SarcasticPerson in DDEELEETTEEDD

Item: DDEELEETTEEDD
Rating: 1.4

Review detail

SarcasticPersonLv23yrSarcasticPerson

Wow! This novel is good yet bad! The three episodes is becoming an info dump and I'm getting bored in reading it. Make it light to read so we readers can be immersed in novel. And what's with the too much use of adjectives, it sounded too exaggerated. The updating stability is good I guess since it's new.

DDEELEETTEEDD

OIdMan

Liked it!

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SarcasticPersonLv2SarcasticPerson

I suggest you add the world building in auxiliary chapter if you don't want info dump

OIdMan:I know about the info dump, but I didn't know how else to blend in so much information. I have already written 8 chapters, and I packed only these first chapters with information. Thanks for the honest review!

3yr

OIdManAuthorOIdMan

I know about the info dump, but I didn't know how else to blend in so much information. I have already written 8 chapters, and I packed only these first chapters with information. Thanks for the honest review!

3yr

OIdManAuthorOIdMan

I already edited the author's thoughts so that people can skip the second chapter if they are uninterested in world-building.

OIdMan:I know about the info dump, but I didn't know how else to blend in so much information. I have already written 8 chapters, and I packed only these first chapters with information. Thanks for the honest review!

3yr