Review Detail of JiangChen73 in Naruto:son of shisui!

While the premise of the story is good, the exucution is poor, i have a hard time reading it due to the monotone nature it goes in. i Do hope you improve, as i will keep this in my library to try it again. Also the titals seem to be in Portuguese.

Your use of quotations please fix it. I can't tell thoughts different from someone talking. You should probably use " " for conversations and ' ' for thoughts. You wouldn't have to use > this to tell when someone different is talking you could just do this: For thoughts Sasuke looked at Danzo and only one thing came to mind. 'I'll kill you for what you did Danzo.' For conversations "Sakura you're annoying," Said Sasuke with a cold look in his eyes. Y-you don't mean that Sasuke!" Sakura retorted. You skip a paragraph when someone new is talking.

will there be romance