First-Person Narration is always welcome in my Book(Pun intended). Captivated from the get-go! Grammar is on point, what caught my eye was that the Chapters published were posted just a few hours ago. World Background is lacking for me and the Story development feels a little off at times, probably just me being a relaxed reader. I recommend it, definitively a good read!
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LIKEAt_Melkert:Thanks for the review, appreciate it! I agree that the world building needs work.. I will try and focus on that in the following chapters!