I really like the opening to the story. The whispers, meeting MC, the abandon buildingš±(I donāt want to say much more because then itās a spoilerš). The plot is very well thought out. I would like to suggest some editing and proofreading, but other than that it was a good story. My hat is tipped to you Authorš
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