Review Detail of Dead_Pharaoh01 in Card Apprentice Daily Log

Absolutely fantastic premise and world building. It's just a shame that this story is clearly only meant to make the author money. I say "author",however, a monkey would likely be able to write a better story. It's a shame when a very good idea is put into the hands of someone like this, it could have been so much better. The characters seem well thought out and there are very few that I dont find at the very least, interesting. Until they begin to speak, that is. The dialogue is atrocious and most of the time seems like the author is ADHD incarnate with the tangents he likes to go on. Lastly, I would be remiss if I didn't talk about the pacing. There is absolutely no reason whatsoever, that in over a thousand chapters, it has been less than 3 months since he got to that world. This story would be 10x better if the author just wrote in a few words every chapter saying that "X amount of time has passed since blah blah blah". Overall, I wish literally anyone else had thought of this idea instead of this author, it could have been a good story.