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Darq_Night_X
Darq_Night_XLv111mthDarq_Night_X

Good story, my only problem being it’s too long, it’s been more than 1300 chapters and there’s NO actual progression. It took this long just for 1-2 months to pass in the story! Stop extending it so much, there’s too much redundant writing. I mean, why would you place full details on each card introduced and make that half the chapter when you can just slowly insert information like that into the story as it progresses?! Other than that it’s a gem of a story

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War_Daddy
War_DaddyLv13War_Daddy

Holy shit, that many?! never mind

Suro_6049:Yea it's a great story but if you remove like 600-700 chapters of fillers it would have been better
Suro_6049
Suro_6049Lv10Suro_6049

Yea it's a great story but if you remove like 600-700 chapters of fillers it would have been better