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Good story, my only problem being it’s too long, it’s been more than 1300 chapters and there’s NO actual progression. It took this long just for 1-2 months to pass in the story! Stop extending it so much, there’s too much redundant writing. I mean, why would you place full details on each card introduced and make that half the chapter when you can just slowly insert information like that into the story as it progresses?! Other than that it’s a gem of a story
One of the better written fanfic stories, it’s got good character development and an alright world building(it’s pretty early in the story so it can improve as we go on). The grammar started out as pretty bad but the author san took the time to learn and improve ,which is a big plus in my books, and made sure to do his due research into the world settings he used. Keep up the good work author-san
Why are there no updates? Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz Update Plz
This is a really good novel if you want an op protagonist who grows stronger quickly and a story with a pretty good world building. It's currently at the stage where he knows that he can steamroll the low level mob who's in the vampire continent but he'll get absolutely decimated by the big bosses who are hanging back in their main continent the moment he does, so he's building up power and experience in battle through training and gaining the memories of the first vampire.
The story has a smart mc, interesting power system (even if it's not explicitly stated what the order of the ranks are), and keeps the reader engaged but it has far too many events packed into it so even though it has been 700+ chapters it's been only one month since the mc transmigrated and he is only at card soldier realm while everyone he deals with is at the card emperor realm and can easily turn him into a prisoner or a labrat (after they fail to kill him) without him being able to resist and even though he knows it's in his best interest to get stronger he focuses on creating things to get him more money even though he doesn't need money due to his previous inventions. I really hope there's a time skip coming where he focuses on training and growing stronger cuz rn I'm bugged by how stupid the mc seems
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Have to agree with that one chief