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The story is good but the fact that after nearly a 1000 chapters we've only progressed a week into the story explains how stretched it is. The author over explains himself more so than required and even after four or five chapters the same explanation is being read out to us. If the author just cuts down on this part it would really be a pretty good story with proper baground and character development. In the recent chapters it seems that even the character development part of this is going askew with people becoming friends in minutes after meeting or having reached a point where they're in love in even lesser time. There are moments where multiple chapters are repeated just due to this over explanation part of the author. I would suggest you not get into this unless you're really bored and have nothing else to read.

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