The_Virgin
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The_Virgin5mthCommentedHappy Birthday!!
It was my birthday btw- The_Virgin1yrPosted
The story is good but the fact that after nearly a 1000 chapters we've only progressed a week into the story explains how stretched it is. The author over explains himself more so than required and even after four or five chapters the same explanation is being read out to us. If the author just cuts down on this part it would really be a pretty good story with proper baground and character development. In the recent chapters it seems that even the character development part of this is going askew with people becoming friends in minutes after meeting or having reached a point where they're in love in even lesser time. There are moments where multiple chapters are repeated just due to this over explanation part of the author. I would suggest you not get into this unless you're really bored and have nothing else to read.
- The_Virgin1yrCommented
Bruh he was in a coma, what do you mean he decided to wake up?
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- The_Virgin1yrCommentedShe doesn't have a sad story or anything like many women around here. She just liked explosives and was recruited by the terrorist group. She was the creator of many bombs and explosives that ended up killing hundreds of people, but Christian finds her personally likable despite her crimes.
- The_Virgin1yrCommented
Your wife is my wife.
'Don't worry, Your family is my family, your enemy is my enemy. I promise will take your revenge.' Shi Tian said in his mind as he could feel the last bit of Will of previous Shi Tian also disappear into the dark void. - The_Virgin1yrReplied to The_Virgin
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"Dong Chen… you know males can give milk if they're sucked for long enough too, right?" - The_Virgin1yrCommented"Dong Chen… you know males can give milk if they're sucked for long enough too, right?"
- The_Virgin1yrCommentedOn the front page of the draft, the title was [Liberty City].
- The_Virgin2yrCommented"I really don't get what you see so important in that company. What was its name again? Ah yes, Marvel Comics."
- The_Virgin2yrCommentedCh 258 From Author
- The_Virgin2yrCommented"That means you have secrets . . . do you, Mr. West?" asked Dumbledore.
- The_Virgin2yrCommented"About that, actually, my wife is an editor too. She is the best one I know of. Why don't you give her the work? You can make her edit a short clip and check her capabilities."
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- The_Virgin2yrCommented"We call ourselves… the Illuminati!"
- The_Virgin2yrCommented
Did... did a fucking webnovel Rick roll me!?🥲
Bullshit here NO NEED TO READ - The_Virgin2yrCommented
Finally, why is it so common for people to accept that a kid is talking in such maturity? Most kids I know are plain idiots or too dumb to even understand how the world works. If any kid spoke to me the way he did, I would seriously doubt my intelligence when I was a child.
"Hehehe! Hold your horses, little rat. Though I must say, I should think about calling you an adult rat now. Your talk is more mature for your age. - The_Virgin2yrCommented
Humko Datatha means ‘scaring me’
"Listen here, you punk. I don't care if your name is Humko Darata or Tumko Darata. I said you'll come with us, so you will come with us. That's an order from a hunter. I don't care about you or your little sister to let you go scot-free. - The_Virgin2yrCommented
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" Don't say that, Boss, have you ever seen another handsome cock like me?? Hehe, this cock will surely made any woman go crazy."