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This is my honest review some time your writing is not written right and that makes it hard to understand the character design is easy to understand but the story development isn't the world development is easy to understand if they know battle through the heaven

Bored in the multiverse [dropped]

ChesterCure

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I just don't like the instant op mc and wish fullfillment type of novels but that is my honest review of the fan fic

ChesterCure
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yeah thanks for the honest review! at least it give me some idea how to fix it unlike people just straight up rant. well i'll be honest is that i dont know much about the background or the world and i just have fun written.