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Blackpaint
BlackpaintLv23yr
2021-10-07 21:58

It's rare to find interesting teen fiction lately, but this one took my interest. The plot looks promising already. Characters are distinct, and the pace of the story is good. I also like the writing style of the author. Way to go author!

LOVE; A CURSE OR BLESSING

Debbiejay
4.9
21 Chs

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Deborah_John_8098
Deborah_John_8098Lv1

Hola Thank you for reading Glad you enjoyed it

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Blackpaint
BlackpaintLv2

No problem:)

Deborah_John_8098:Hola Thank you for reading Glad you enjoyed it
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Bright_Gabriel_9341
Bright_Gabriel_9341Lv13

I am giving five to this story because I simply love it. Wow! It was fun to read and the pace and dialogues were breathtaking. What about the character design, it was amazing. I will keep it for later. Why? Because it is wonderful and makes me to laugh, just like when I am watching some funny Japanese anime. Nice one author....

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Scarlet5ky
Scarlet5kyLv6

Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!

3yr
Pooja_Bansal_3168
Pooja_Bansal_3168Lv3

My, My, Witches and Hunters. I am so into it. The name of protagonist is gonna stay in my mind for a long time. Gabriella. I am liking it. The synopsis says it all.

3yr
ChubbyLiv
ChubbyLivLv14

I read until ch.9 before it got locked, which in my opinion is too soon. Reading this novel, I felt like I went back in time to my teenage days. The style of writing is very similar to Western Wattpad stories. 🤭 The MC is your average girl, I would dare say that she is easily relatable to most readers, that's if not for her very special background. Not gonna spoil that, though it would be revealed in early chapters.  Gabriella has this huge crush on the school's most handsome and richest boy in school. From his behavior he's not the biggest scum as they worked on a school assignment without any complications, ate a pizza, watched Mulan, so I don't understand why she has such a love-hate relationship with him. She hates anything that has to do with him, except his body. She never mentioned why she liked him, she only and always described his good looks. This would be the biggest minus from me. But she's a teenager, inexperienced, so, I'll forgive it. 🥰 The chapter lengths are perfect, the flow of the story is nice, not too fast nor too slow. The grammar wasn't jarring, I didn't have a need to edit every paragraph or stop myself from reading something twice. Everything was understandable, and the things Gabriel saw or felt were well described.

3yr
Emmy_logz2
Emmy_logz2Lv12

Wow. you have quite a story. I have read and I cant stop myself from reading on and on. Gabriella is really lucky and at the same time she seems to attract trouble. I am following the story closely keep updating

3yr
Stoptakingusername
StoptakingusernameLv1

This is honestly very good, and that’s mostly due to the characters. They honestly feel like real people, they have very relatable goals and flaws. I’m not saying they carry, the world is good too but the characters, whenever they get the chance, steal the show.

3yr
VisualKoFey
VisualKoFeyLv1

I read eight chapters but I can say that this is a great story of witches showing the past to the next generation witch to take revenge for them. However, they forget that the MC isn't a tool, but a living being. The story has a great potential, keep it up.

3yr
Devanshi_Rathod
Devanshi_RathodLv1

Okay so I am here for a review, firstly, start of the story is very cool and attention grasping. Secondly, I loved the story development, which keeps the readers on their toes for next chapters. Overall, it was a great read. This novel is landing straight into my library. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, AUTHOR !!

3yr
Write_D_Words
Write_D_WordsLv11

It was a good read. This book has a potential! I like witches and I am enjoying this free chapters ~~ [img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
MayDreamer
MayDreamerLv4

The beginning of the book was nice as well as the dialogues were catchy and entertaining. And I loved the book cover it matches the story. Last but not least Good luck author.

3yr
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