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2021-11-03 04:26

I read until ch.9 before it got locked, which in my opinion is too soon. Reading this novel, I felt like I went back in time to my teenage days. The style of writing is very similar to Western Wattpad stories. 🤭 The MC is your average girl, I would dare say that she is easily relatable to most readers, that's if not for her very special background. Not gonna spoil that, though it would be revealed in early chapters.  Gabriella has this huge crush on the school's most handsome and richest boy in school. From his behavior he's not the biggest scum as they worked on a school assignment without any complications, ate a pizza, watched Mulan, so I don't understand why she has such a love-hate relationship with him. She hates anything that has to do with him, except his body. She never mentioned why she liked him, she only and always described his good looks. This would be the biggest minus from me. But she's a teenager, inexperienced, so, I'll forgive it. 🥰 The chapter lengths are perfect, the flow of the story is nice, not too fast nor too slow. The grammar wasn't jarring, I didn't have a need to edit every paragraph or stop myself from reading something twice. Everything was understandable, and the things Gabriel saw or felt were well described.

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