Review Detail of Mell_FLouis in Waiting to be Free

I like the way that the first chapter is essentially focused on Benjiro’s day to day, and within that we get specific details about the kind of person he is and some nice characterization. His interaction with the girl was silly but interesting, and I also think it did a lot to reveal context for her personality as well! Like what the other reviewer mentioned, it might be good to update more regularly. Overall, I like it!