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Dr_Chad
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2021-08-22 07:19

I've read the raws long time ago and I quit. The reasons are the ff: very bad, first the protagonist's age, you can't take seriously an 11 year old child struggling, the protagonist doesn't have his own story, he basically gets into the films of others and doesn't add anything, it's all the same just as with a child 11 years old in the middle, he doesn't hide any secrets, he goes around saying things about the future and the past to the characters, very bad there is nothing different, everything is just like the movies, but with an 11 year old child in the middle Character of MC is cringe and naïve good boy...from here you can guess how the story goes... every time he sees marvel characters he is like oooh this hero that hero i am going to help him... oooh i am touched by his speech.. bla bla y*ck.. and i quit .. got enough. man instead of our heroes journey we are seeing writer writing the movie story and put the MC in their. No character development and no imagination ability. Chinese have to put cultivation in every single f**k*ng thing all the time, making things worse. the biggest disappointment is that the writer initially wanted main character to have metal ability like magneto but later for no reason at all give him all this b*llsh*t cultivation like abilities. We rarely see metal abilities. boring no different from canon, mc is just a passerby and doesnt have any used in the plot

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Dakingle0
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where'd you read it on and what's the title?

Dark_Magma
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ow yeah also thanks for mentioning...everything in the review. saved the trouble of going crazy over another novel

AKIRA_0
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MTL

Dakingle0:where'd you read it on and what's the title?
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