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the writing quality of this pretty good story development is slow but the author said it was slow so thats excluded character design... its something alright but not in the good way i'll give an example the mc ''servants'' treat their supposed ''master'' like their old friend which is stupid since their supposed to be servants and there's this one maid who i wish just offs's herself because my god she's annoying long story short read this book if your into mc that get pushed around like bit$ch btw author u should add a tag saying beta mc
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PhantomMedjay
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If you hate Liz, then imma have to fight you! She aint as OG as Alfred, but mad respect to her! I'll take note about the servant situation but its kind of pointless in my eyes since story and character progression is done accordingly to the start vision. however i have noted your thoughts concerning noble behaviour (FYI Important Character will help will this soon enough as its part of the overall narrative)
dont mind my other replies they hella toxic its just cuz im edgy so dont take it to heart which i know u wont but ill stil say it
PhantomMedjay:If you hate Liz, then imma have to fight you! She aint as OG as Alfred, but mad respect to her! I'll take note about the servant situation but its kind of pointless in my eyes since story and character progression is done accordingly to the start vision. however i have noted your thoughts concerning noble behaviour (FYI Important Character will help will this soon enough as its part of the overall narrative)
Voidz_Zero:dont mind my other replies they hella toxic its just cuz im edgy so dont take it to heart which i know u wont but ill stil say it