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The reincarnation story is not as realistic as the title suggests, but for a green writer, it isn't bad. I love the new Dojutsu, but I find it completely unnecessary when he already has Mokuton. The baby should have been traveling with Tsunade and Shizune after the death of his parents. Backstory I made up: some Senju parents (Tsunade's cousin is the father) leave the village to live safely away from the shinobi life and death. The mother gets assassinated during her pregnancy after the sudden death of her husband. In this story, the being saves the child by having Tsunade walk by and reincarnates you instead of the baby that should not have existed. The mother still dies because this is her fate one way or another. I mean, this is important for the creation of a relevant main character. I believe that the writer would have had an easier time with the story if he added only the Dojutsu to the mc. No need for a headache to sort the backstory, if you know what I mean.
Simi realistic reincarnation into Naruto
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No problem! You are a talented writer. Once you're free, consider writing a fiction where the mc is born in another village like Suna with magnet release. This combination will give you an environment where you can get as creative as you want with the system (How early you enter the academy and start training/ stuff they teach there) and an op Kekkei Genkai! Based on what I have read so far, you're knowledgeable and can use modern science to modify your skills like attracting and repelling enemies.
Kyle80888:I get the non realistic aspect, as its impossible to make a story, much less a fan fic, realistic. And yeah, the wood release in kinda not necessary. It just makes the plot more convoluted. I think i’ll get rid of it. The dojutsu is already really cool and powerful. Thanks for the review.