The story is good but I can't stand a forced plot. I find it annoying that Mc never had a grudge against his family for abandoning him at the age of 3.

I like the spin in how the story going to turn. in the part we can get there cold awkward family understandings, but what will happens to whitey do he still exist and what happen to willow father and why is ozipin such a nosy[img=recommend] pants n crow has a bad luck semblance how is he going to find information.

The fanfiction is great to read also, are you combining the Harry Potter world and rwby or both worlds are separate. I had a final question are going to add yuri in the MC harem?

Writing quality is pretty bad, the author can't tell the difference between fell and fall, tons of grammatical mistakes that could've been fixed if they used Grammarly. The plot feels really really forced, otherwise, the storyline isn't too bad, I can already get the gist of the story by C4 but I might come back and edit once I read to chap 40 or so.

Most longest trash i even see (whic isnt chinese xd) plot manupilated to make us see mc good so much idiot mc act like child there isnt change to they event 1 time call here harriet Off my eyes bleeding which brainl3ss idoots make it. 4.4 True rate is 1.31 İ think plot is copied by chinese book too

Would recommend 10/10 good start and interesting premise Yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I

empty plot, empty characters, empty relationships. In all of the fanfiction, only the initial idea of a distorted love between Weiss and Aegis is interesting, a distorted love rather than an ordinary one. But even you failed by making your hero another typical garbage and I never saw his love for Weiss about which you wrote in the beginning. And a see only a typical garbage MC who will replenish the harem after any first meeting

good story with trash mc jk jk . take things for granted, with your family dumping you silly.,...........................[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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