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Review Detail of Jay_Soul in The Hunter That Returned From Hell

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Jay_Soul
Jay_SoulLv153yrJay_Soul

So far ive Read 43 chapter its an good and has amazing potential but i think there are some thIngs that need to fixed: 1. Mcs control over is emotions when he fights bc he kills without thinking and causes quite a lot if problems for his family trying to “protect” them, if he continues like this he’ll be the reason for their deaths. A why to fix this in my opinion which i think is absolutely nessecary any way is a skill i call “absolute control” (absolute control over his mind,body,and arua) is goes with his title of an assassin and the author has mentioned he is not in control of his mind 50% and is suppressing an inner monster in which will get rid of these problem or at least help 2. repeative fighting style for 2-3 chapter per fight i can pretty much sum it up for in 3 words... dodge,strike, and kill. for 400 years of fighting its pretty bland so i propose : A skill i call “god of mastery” its use is simple he gets instant mastery towards any martal arts and cold weapons but the priority will be daggers,katana, ninjato, bows, and needles/posion,ect. And 3. which think would be a great skill “phantom/light manipulation” a skill in which is he intangible to physical to at a certain amout and can also conseal his arua and only those that are stronger then him can sense him/ his mana. he can also become one with a shadow or become invisible. This is my first a probably last review like this so hope it good. :)

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sydwrld
sydwrldLv4sydwrld

idk... the second skill sounds kinda OP, might need a little nerfing if the author gonna put in it in the novel imo

somesadfuck
somesadfuckLv2somesadfuck

Wow

Sivil
SivilLv12Sivil

Hello Author. I don't want to write a book but I would like a book written for me so please change your book to match my preferences. The entitlement flows through this one.

Jay_Soul
Jay_SoulLv15Jay_Soul

Not really if its a something i think will improve the book and i have points and made suggestions if he doesnt use it idc tbh

Sivil:Hello Author. I don't want to write a book but I would like a book written for me so please change your book to match my preferences. The entitlement flows through this one.
Magic_
Magic_Lv11Magic_

i f u c king love this, bravo. well said.

Sivil:Hello Author. I don't want to write a book but I would like a book written for me so please change your book to match my preferences. The entitlement flows through this one.
ShIch
ShIchLv1ShIch

? Yes ¿

Rish_madara
Rish_madaraLv3Rish_madara

thanks for showing your support and plz keeo supporting the novel🙂

Sivil:Hello Author. I don't want to write a book but I would like a book written for me so please change your book to match my preferences. The entitlement flows through this one.