Spoiler Alert:Remember in Chapter 3, Michael and Williams were shot, the point is that they didn't die. In Chapter 25, Prince and co didn't survive after their bodies were restricted from escape. Introducing 5 other characters from 5 different countries:USA,India, China, Korea, and Philippine as the 10 of them will have to survive or die in a horror state of coma, if they die in this horror state of coma, they die in real life. LIFE IN 2021 will end on December 31st, please keep reading and supporting, I wish all chapters would be free but it's locked😭 yet the love am receiving from this book is too much, this is going to be the best book on Webnovel just like the Vampire System, I love you guys, I see you viewing, voting, reviewing, etc, only God will bless you for the little time you've spent on my story.

Chapter 28 ending and chapter 29 was so scary, the scenes haven't left me up till now, l can wait for more horror chapters, I love this book 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

The Good: The writing quality is well done and we have a plethora of characters to read about. The Bad: What is going on in this story? The plot is so disjointed that I can't follow it. It reads more like a term paper than a novel. The grammar is surprisingly well done, but the actual structure needs a lot of work. I can't tell if the author is improving or not as the quality stays the same for all of the free chapters. Maybe they were all added at once? The s*x scene made me giggle and I don't think that was intentional. The Neutral: Not much of a horror or thriller, but that might be in the later chapters that are locked behind premium. What I am having the most difficult time with is following where the plot is going. I feel like it is just a list of things that are happening without much else. Regardless, read your work out loud and you will catch many of the issues with readability. While the character descriptions are great, the world still feels empty. Is this meant to be a biography of sorts?

I need more. Give me more🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶😲🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😦😱😦😦😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

Such a great story author , the blurb of your story is interesting, I love how your writing .The story is enchanting and so cool at the same time , keep it up author and great work. 🥰

The story at the beginning made me think of life as someone young and inexperience to what life outside is. Very recommended to people who want to read something deep.

I love how well-written, and insightful this is! It's much more serious, and relatable then other novels I've read on here, if that's your cup of tea you'll love this novel. Can't wait for more chapters!

I like how realistic the book was written. The conversations are of in time and one would relate and would somehow connect the deeper you get into the book. Nicely done.

i really like how real it is, how the characters are their true selves, that's what we all need in a book, great induction of your culture :) your novel touches hearts, welldone!