Item: Ben 10; Omnitrix Reload
Rating: 3
Author: Davi_Mello

Davi_MelloLv44mth

2024-11-07 10:38

você seriamente precisa melhorar a gramática e rever a estrutura dos textos,é muito difícil acompanhar a linha de raciocínio além de os textos não terem uma explicação muito clara as vezes, tornando difícil de imaginar a cena que está acontecendo, mas fora isso eu não tenho mais nada a reclamar, a história é ótima e você retratou bem a personalidade dos personagens

Ben 10; Omnitrix Reload

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