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ToYourKnight
ToYourKnightLv42yr
2022-05-28 16:16

I’m curious as to main characters powers as looking at the chapter names it’s obvious that he doesn’t get the Omnitrix(also obvious if you know anything about Ben Ten) so I do wonder what the mc can do to be actually useful

Ben 10; Omnitrix Reload

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LordFangYuan
LordFangYuanLv4

author the text format is difficult to read and follow, improve grammar and dialogue, it is difficult to follow the novel author the text format is difficult to read and follow, improve grammar and dialogue, it is difficult to follow the novel

3yr

TomTaylorSolos
TomTaylorSolosLv14

interesting... . .

4yr
AbelWizard
AbelWizardLv3

ben 10.... quero saber oq vai acontecer, então vou ler e ​dar ​uma força aqben 10.... quero saber oq vai acontecer, então vou ler e ​dar ​uma força aq..ben 10.... quero saber oq vai acontecer, então vou ler e ​dar ​uma força aq.ben 10.... quero saber oq vai acontecer, então vou ler e ​dar ​uma força aqben 10.... quero saber oq vai acontecer, então vou ler e ​dar ​uma força aq..

4yr
AbsoluteLoli_Lover
AbsoluteLoli_LoverLv4

Oiga señro autor me gusta su historia pero como podra ver soy un habla hispana por lo tanto le agradeceria si pudiera cambiar el nombre del Mc porque will tiene distintos significados y en el traductor enves de poner "will salta para esquibar un laser" me pone " salvagemente squivar laser un" el nombre will no me agrada mucho asique yo creeo que arthur queda mejor no? Y otro problema las intercciones de los personaje y como cambian de ecenario demasiado rapido porque en una parte yo leia q Gwen estaba con el abuelo para que en un descuido Gwen ya esta luchando contra robots o sintiendoce celosa de "ben" A y hablando de ben puedes cambiar su nombre? Porque yo creo que PENNY (diminutivo de penelope) suena mejor a BENNY (diminutibo de 💇) es por eso que pennelope suena mejor porque digamos el abuelo se pone serio no le puede decir benny porque eso le quitaria seriedad al asunto yo opino y con su permiso que hay que cambiar nombres No porque esta mal sino por cosas de estetica

4yr
Davi_Mello
Davi_MelloLv4

você seriamente precisa melhorar a gramática e rever a estrutura dos textos,é muito difícil acompanhar a linha de raciocínio além de os textos não terem uma explicação muito clara as vezes, tornando difícil de imaginar a cena que está acontecendo, mas fora isso eu não tenho mais nada a reclamar, a história é ótima e você retratou bem a personalidade dos personagens

4mth
artemdeus
artemdeusLv5

it's an amazing fanfic and very engaging, I hope that this doesn't drop, so keep up the good work, author.😎👍

7mth
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