A good read and a good writer. Overall its an amazing book, the interactions are great, amazing characters - Looking foward to Ganyu & Lumi joining the harem amd in the interactions, its nice and dun to read. My negative points are Yomite the mc, he needs to organise himself, I understand the want to enjoy himself but he has minimal if none at all in terms of power to protect or claim what he wants and his girls. He also seems to not know how to set order, he allows those around him to do as they wish going against what he wishes to do and his weak will in following through and things he says to show respect for those he cares. He also seems pretty self-absorbed. Not throwing shade at the writer its engaging, it's just the Mc who is the centre point goes from being bearable to being dislike-able, he doesn't use his abilities at all really or at least in a semi- intelligent way. Also there's he doesn't really read into the fact that the goddess who sent him obviously has some dodgy motives in addition to the fact that she's obviously significantly stronger than everyone on the Plane he is. Sorry for the rant I wanted to make a genuine review but is what it is. I hope all is well and the book isn't dropped.
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