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2021-11-05 15:10

It's not trash. It's not that good. It's there. The fanfic is a wish-fulfilment story not so well done. The story itself is... an excuse for making MC OP and have servants (the classical Wattpad trope with MC having Gate of Babylon yadayada). The text speeches aren't as bad as Wattpad's, but the dialogue are not that good either... I would say... cringe? from time to time. I... don't want to recommand it. But I know it could interest some, as it's not the worst that exist and the story has the harem that people come for. But... there will still be something that make you think the story is not so so good.

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