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Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv133yr
2021-05-30 15:22

Oh my god yes this is a masterpiece I’m loving it so far he is a Demi-servant Gilgamesh who actually WORKS for his power! Jesus I’m loving this guy

Fate/Eternal

Mystery_18th
4.2
30 Chs

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Mystery_18th
Mystery_18thAuthor

I'm so glad you are liking the MC, I am actually worried that people will hate the MC. But your words gave me confidence. thanks a lot for the review, I appreciate it a lot.

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Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv13

Haha it’s amazing honestly usually if someone has even closely GOB like powers he is essentially god from the the get go but your portrayal allows it to be unique and grow with him. His character background is interesting too and if anyone can fix a broken MC it’s the ball of fluff and sugar that is tammamo

Mystery_18th:I'm so glad you are liking the MC, I am actually worried that people will hate the MC. But your words gave me confidence. thanks a lot for the review, I appreciate it a lot.
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