I will be giving my honest opinion. and probably answer some question people are always unable to clearly answer. It's Harem, 2 Wifes, one he left behikd and didn't think about for 40 or so chapters but is in a time stopped world, the other is still going on with her occupation, he never really showed a relationship build up, it just happened, another is more funny which is the fiancée he doesn't know he has, which is properly written I think.... except author spoiled her story of what she is going to accomplished for no reason even tho he said he likes her. The MC nerfs himself and Author does so too. Idk why you give him power just to nerf him, he never developed after explaining the reason for MC nerfing himself as the reason didn't apply to the aftermath. MC acts like a retard a lot. But it's sometimes funny, which is somewhat related to the trope Author is going for. It has great comedic value, but at one part it gets trashed by his interaction iwth one princess, this relationship(not romantical, at least up to chapter 85) is being dragged out and ruining things. He is hypocritical and has contradictory mindseets(not the multiverse part, all within OG world.) The setting of him being a college student isn't really upheld, it's just a setting to start the story as the MC still genuinely acta like a kid. It's higher world BS in a sense with people controlling the multiverse and so on, and they interact with the MC, every Hobo there has the ability to jump throught the multiverse for no reason, the Author seems to drag everything into comedy as he also restricts a lot for no reason. OG world: Author tried to make a world of his own but he didn't plan it out, the powerlevels are messed up, he mentions levels but says they are useless, which is illogical because those levels are based on something....Which means those attributes would be useless too. And MC has superior experience which is a given but as said previously, author nerfs MC too, in the form of MC forgetting his own skills, restricting him, making him lazy despite MC saying he is going to be serious. I think author didn't really think it through with the powerscaling as it makes no sense and plotholes are everywhere.... The reason why it gets 4 stars is for the comedy, author's shounen writing(his effort) and the illustrations. And that I like multiverse travel with an OG world as it's in my opinion better than OG earth as base or another stpry as a base.
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Wow... I never thought I am lacking on those fields. Thank you for your honest review. I will try to fix those as much as I can.
Bruh, you are writing well and the story is funny, except for the realtionship with second princess which I find subjectively annoying, but I guess making the connection with what you said after Volume one, you didn't really plan it out as much. The only thing I would advise you to uphold is: to be more consistent. No book/story is perfect, and none will ever be. Just that consistency in a story is the basic. I wish you luck in writing further chapters. Btw. Bright... was his appearance based of Keith Westernberg? (The reason why....ended up by the duke's mansion.)
Thank you for your advice. I will try to do that in later chapters. Yes, Bright is based on Noah from that shoujo manhwa.
