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Sculp
SculpLv123yr
2021-03-25 17:48

I love the writing style of the author. It is too good plus, it is hard to find it something like this kind of writing style also it is pretty understanable with perfect words in perfect places. World Background and the explanation of charecter's also good. You can feel their emotion and thought's to some degree and more which is perfect. Spoiler alert. Spoiler alert. Spoiler Alert. ........ ........ But there is a bad part that make me depressed a lot. I want to read this a lot I really want it but this part almost makes me not read it. The bad part is POV changes which is too much and too early to began with and it is really makes me sad. Until chapter 12 you will see MC's POV three times in the chapters if I am remembering correctly. You will have more general understanding and information for other characters as if they are the MC which is not my style of reading but I can't say it is bad because everyone has their own preference but it really makes me really sad about all of it. But don't worry I am just ranting in here. So that means brings me this information. Author-san told that it changed to MC's POV in the latest chapters which is good and to my liking of reaing style. I didn't reach out there but I knew that with this writing style and with MC perspective more I love this book more and more. Thank you for your efforts author-san. Take care.

Anno: Igentis Bellis

Raven_Aelwood
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87 Chs

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Thank you.

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Sculp
SculpLv12

Thank you for your efforts author-san until now. This is it for me maybe I will read it again later on in the future. I just became too depressed to read it no offence. It is like if there is bunch of protagonist with Levi I had read it 32 chapters and plus I also checked the other chapters to see if there is enough Pov's of mc and it is still not enough at least for me. There are a lot of Pov's of side charecters that I wont even remember them in the long or can't focus on them because I just don't read Mc's pov 3 to 4 chapters in a row. And that is just a lot. This far Levi's father mentinoed a lot more than Levi and Levi has just too few pov's. Just can't read it like this. I was pushing myself because I had say it and I will say it again your writing style is so perfect and I liked it too much that pushed me so far but it is not just not for me. It was kind of battle of will to countine to read it until now honestly. I myself even got suprised because I literally loved it want to read it and follow it in the future but I just can't do read it like this it is too much for me. If I didn't like it I wouldn't even bother talking or writing like this. Thank you again for all of your efforts author-san.

Raven_Aelwood:Thank you.
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