'Transported to another world' a phrase you're all too familiar with. Such a story is usually followed by a lacklustre plot, weak characters, and frequent exposition dumps that are supposed to be world-building. But stick with this one. It could easily become a published book series. I would recommend this wholeheartedly to people who love detail and explanations and realism. An eccentric genius is thrown into a feudal world. So he begins an industrial revolution in a small mining town and attempts to restore order on a warring continent. Boring extra: The story is intriguing and develops at a meticulous pace. The world is built slowly and emphasizes locations well, attaching events to certain places and giving them a character of there own. The description is the embodiment of a complete picture in your mind, making it optional to glance at a map to gain the whole picture. The character design is splendid. Personalities are well displayed and developed Overall, if you read 30 chapters then you're forever hooked.

The details and world building are well fleshed out, hands out to the author for creating such a masterpiece. I can tell that the author has a very wide imagination.

Lengthy expositon dumps, characters that feel more like planks of wood, main characters where their only character development is becoming more powerful, sloppy world-building, etc. If you’re sick of the normal junk where its just an author writing down their power fantasies, prepare to have your mind blown with this masterpiece of literature; with delicately crafted characters that feel alive with their own ambitions and goals, a setting that has intricate and complex economic, political, and military relationships strewn into a realistically inhabited world, and a main character that uses a brain finally!

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A very believable setting and characters, frankly it’s refreshing to see such diverse and well portrayed motivations, especially in comparison to other similar works. I was slightly scared that the portrayal of the main characters mental stat would be make this story unreadable for me, but it has been handled well, unusual mental states are so incredibly hard to do right. Can’t wait for more.

the story is quite entertaining and interesting, please author do not abandon it. ............................................................................

Thirty eight chapters in. Great plot Animated characters Vivid descriptions and locations Acceptable English Great fight scenes Reasonable upload speed Amazing plot development Obsessive realism Subtle comedy Intriguing, high-level psychopathic MC, Oh, also hinting at a promising romantic subplot All in all, an amazing book. Give it a try, you won't regret it

Perfect Kingdom building novel MC- Cold, calculative, chaotic neutral disposition, chad, think with his brain. Other characters - characters are not one dimensional World background - the geopolitical map of the world is explained Romance - as of ch 74 some love interest is recealed but not much of romance stuff has happened

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