Item: Star Wars: Road to Eternity
Rating: 5
Author: Lucifer_sama

Lucifer_samaLv33yr

2021-03-09 08:37

This is my first star wars fanfic on this site and oh boy if i'm loving it . Everything is explained beautifully in detail and still manages to make it sound interesting. I like how you explained the use of force in detail. The MC is very interesting. He thinks rationally and isn't just a goody two shoes so that's a nice change of pace. The dialogues are written nicely and flow with story. The story seems to capture you and doesn't bore you even for a second. The grammar is also very good. The author certainly knows his business and the words are used accurately. Have high hopes for this fanfiction . Please continue the great work .

Star Wars: Road to Eternity

Lady_Synthetic

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BookWizard23412Lv2

Very good. Probably one of the most interesting Star Wars fanfiction, if not the most.

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BoxManRulerLv4

I love star wars and this novel is up to my expectations and I would love to see where it would go.

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Xzeeas_Lv4

I just hope it doesn't get 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SCP_0999Lv4

The fanfiction has a lot of potential and is interesting to read. Author are you going to add an A.I in his harem? I am just curious. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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HolypotatoLv4

read first 4 chapters.I can say story idea is interesting and while I may not be a native english speaker grammer of this story didnt fell bad at all while I didnt try to find mistakes there wasnt any that I noticed immediately. writing is fluid. if phase of updates and quality of the story stays the same I dont see any reason this doesnt become well liked. thanks for this work author

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CRENIMTLv3

interesting ff...

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maaddzLv4

Really interesting so far. Love the introduction of the MC and the relationship with Belial built. Interesting 'starting' race, hope it's utilized in the future. Insane speed of updates, for now, hope u can keep going! All in all, really looking forward to the future of the novel!

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Inkognito96Lv10

Reveal spoiler

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Jokers_Theif_2023Lv12

This is a the best Star Wars fiction I’ve seen to date, hopefully you will continue writing it. The pacing is really good, I’m curious how the future of this story will turn out. KEEP IT UP [GOOD STUFF] hope it still going .?

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