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This is unreadable... it is like reading a MTL that was thrown into a blender that was set on fire. If you get a editor that can read dead languages maybe they can somehow piece together a understandable version of your story, until then I am gonna have to say this is a HARD pass for me and anyone else that has a basic 3rd grade reading level. I couldn't even get halfway into the first chapter. I was so lost I thought the author was trolling me.

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Super Extraction in Marvel

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MrUNIVERSE
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yeah you got me there

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when I was reading it was chaos