Review Detail of evilantonio430 in The forbidden fruit

I'll have to admit that, when I read the prologue and found out this author was ESL, my expectations weren't too high. Surprisingly, though, the story was quite well written. everything else aside, I found myself not needing to play localization expert for long. aside from mistaking new jersey from an NYC burrough, her stuff is super accurate. case in point, I had thought the whole 'fancy nightclub in a warehouse' was total bunk. I thus went to my dad, who lived and worked in the NYC area when I was a kid; not even a full sentence into explaining the premise, though, I found out this was a totally real thing which I imagine only fellow new yorkers would readily know off hand. And if that wasn't crazy enough, after the pov switched at chapter 6 I think, I found no more localization errors. you can tell this author has put tremendous work here to make an engaging experience. the saying may be 'write what you know,' but for the author here I feel it really doesn't apply. Good luck and keep at it! signed, totally not a sock puppet for review swapper