I actually like your story! It has a lot of potential. Sure, it could use a little more here and there, but the idea is nice, and the character design is also quite good. What I appreciate are the world background and the description. I think they are both able the immerse you in the story. Overall, good job author!
Gaburieru
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LIKEGaburieru:Thank you for reading! Glad you liked it, did a good amount of research before I started this story