Review Detail of Aevitas in The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Writing Quality: 3/5 The grammar needs a lot of work, it was barely readable. Story Development: 3/5 It was kind of all over the place, couldn't really tell what was going on half the time. Character Design: 4/5 The characters are fine, a bit hard to understand at times due to the grammar. World Background: 3/5 Generic from what I saw, didn't really get to see much.