I really like how the author write story and the way she described it is awesome.. However be careful to the whole plot as you have to justify why the heroin is talking to her alter ego because it is quite unusual for a person or even a friend of the heroin to know that. The readers might feel uncomfortable and judge the character of the heroin.. So far I know that the author have a real talent and a gem.. So please keep shining...
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