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2022-09-15 23:19

the plot is interesting, i am enjoying quite a lot. at first i dont like natalie's character since for me she's only all talk but as the story progress, you can see her growth. too much couple. somehow i feel their relationship is being overforced. personally i like niania's character and joshxalice realationship. how their relationship develop smoother and believable 🤭. and i must say this novel has many gramatical error. it was a bit disturbing. but still love it.

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Thanks for your genuine review. I'm taking time out to edit them but I'm busy so the editing is slow paced. Thanks for reading.

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