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2021-07-05 12:31

The plot is not something out of the box but the way it's being written. It's captivating and also intriguing. All the characters are given enough screen time for us to know more about them. The updates are mostly on time if nothing happens. World Background is good too. Character development is slow but engaging.

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Thanks for the review.😘😘😘

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