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Badz_Baddy
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2021-09-06 21:04

Writing Quality, 5 star. If anyone tried to argue with this statement, I don't know what quality of writing you're used to. Story development, 5 star. Not forced and everything is logical. The changes in Matt's mindset is gradual and not sudden that it will disgust the readers. Character design, 5 star. The protagonist has this instinct of what specie he is right now, unlike most of the novel where goblins (MC) didn't have the slightest goblin mindset. Also, his changes are good, it's so natural that sometimes I feel that the character is alive. All of the characters are well designed. There's nothing I can complain so I give it 5 star. Updating stability, 4 star. I know that writers have real life to deal with, but posting nothing after 2 weeks seems sus. I checked his other works and I noticed that many of them have been dropped. I really like this work, so please don't drop this too. Also, if I'm not new in this novel, I might've rated this as 3 star. World Background, 5 star. The mixed of the space game that some of the readers mentioned and reality makes this story interesting. Function of facilities and some things are described properly, I'm mentioning this because some novel are full of bs. Overall, I highly recommend this novel among the people who love Sci-fi, Non-human MC, Romance, Evolution, Weak to strong MC, and logical MC. I usually don't like romance but humans like exception. This is one of the 3 romance novels I've been reading, so I really recommend this!

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Pill_Guy
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i recently moved and am having a hard time getting back into the swing of things. Also, I only work on one story at a time so of course the others wouldn't have updates.

Badz_Baddy
Badz_BaddyLv13

Oh, then be careful? I don't know what moving feels like but I guess it's troubsome. Also, if you're having a hard time, take it slowly. We don't want this story's quality to plummet. Man, I really love this story. [img=recommend]

Pill_Guy:i recently moved and am having a hard time getting back into the swing of things. Also, I only work on one story at a time so of course the others wouldn't have updates.
Eustace_DeThuranni
Eustace_DeThuranniLv13

Dude you've never moved? 0_o Pretty sus not gonna lie...

Badz_Baddy:Oh, then be careful? I don't know what moving feels like but I guess it's troubsome. Also, if you're having a hard time, take it slowly. We don't want this story's quality to plummet. Man, I really love this story. [img=recommend]
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InsertaGoodName
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PILATE: What's ๐Ÿ˜ฆ so... funny ๐Ÿ˜‚ about ๐Ÿ’ฆ 'Sussus Amongus'? CENTURION: Well ๐Ÿ˜ฆ, it's a joke ๐Ÿ˜‚ name ๐Ÿ“›, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ. PILATE: I ๐Ÿ‘ have a vewy ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ gweat ๐Ÿ‘ fwiend ๐Ÿ‘‰ in Wome ๐Ÿ›๐Ÿšจ called โ˜ 'Sussus Amongus'. GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #4 ๐Ÿ’ฆ: chuckling PILATE: Silence ๐Ÿ”‡! What is all ๐Ÿ’ฏ this insolence โ—? You ๐Ÿ‘ˆ will find ๐Ÿ”Žโ„ yourself in gladiator ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป school ๐Ÿซ vewy ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ quickly ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’จ with wotten behavior ๐Ÿ—ฏ like ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽˆ that. BRIAN ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ‘ฆ: Can I ๐Ÿ‘ go ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿšด now, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ? slap ๐Ÿ‘‹ Aaah ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ‘‰! Eh ๐Ÿ’ฉ. PILATE: Wait โŒš till ๐Ÿ”ฅ Sussus Amongus hears ๐Ÿ‘‚ of this. GUARD ๐Ÿ‘ฎโ€โ™‚๏ธ #4 ๐Ÿ’ฆ: chuckling PILATE: Wight โœ…! Take ๐Ÿ‘Š him ๐Ÿ‘ด away ๐Ÿ˜! CENTURION: Oh ๐Ÿ™€, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ, he ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿฟ-- he ๐Ÿ‘ฅ only-- PILATE: No ๐Ÿ™…, no ๐Ÿ˜ฃ. I ๐Ÿ‘ want ๐Ÿ˜‹ him ๐Ÿ‘ด fighting ๐ŸฅŠ๐Ÿ“• wabid, wild ๐Ÿป animals ๐Ÿ˜บ within ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ…ฐ a week ๐Ÿ—“. CENTURION: Yes โœ…, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ. Come ๐Ÿ’ฆ on ๐Ÿ”›, you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ. GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #4 ๐Ÿ’ฆ: Ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ haa ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿคฃ, ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿ˜‚. Hooo ๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿผ hooo ๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿผ hoo ๐ŸŽฃ hoo ๐ŸŽฃ. Hoo ๐Ÿ‘Œ hoo ๐Ÿ‘Œ... PILATE: I ๐Ÿ‘ will not have my fwiends ๐Ÿ‘ฅ widiculed by the common ๐Ÿฉ soldiewy ๐Ÿ’‚โ€โ™€๏ธ. Anybody ๐Ÿ‘ง๐Ÿ‘ด๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘จ else ๐Ÿ˜ฉ feel ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜œ like ๐Ÿ˜„ a little ๐Ÿ‘Œ... giggle ๐Ÿ˜‚... when ๐Ÿ‘ I ๐Ÿ‘ mention ๐Ÿ‘„ my fwiend ๐Ÿ‘‰... Sussus... GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚๐Ÿฏ #1 โ—: chuckling PILATE: ...Amongus? GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #1 โ—: chuckling PILATE: What about ๐Ÿ’ฆ you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ? Do you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ find ๐Ÿ”Ž it... wisible... when โฐ I ๐Ÿ‘ say ๐Ÿ’ฌ the name ๐Ÿ“›๐Ÿ˜‚... 'Sussus'... GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #3 ๐Ÿ–ฑ: chuckle ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜† PILATE: ...'Amongus'? GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #1 ๐ŸŽ„ and GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #2 ๐Ÿ•: chuckling PILATE: He ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿพโ€โš–๏ธ has a wife ๐Ÿ‘ฐ, you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ๐Ÿป know ๐Ÿค”. You ๐Ÿ‘ˆ know ๐Ÿค” what she's ๐Ÿ‘ฉ๐Ÿฝ called ๐Ÿ“ž? She's ๐Ÿ‘ง called ๐Ÿ“ฒ... 'Ventia'. 'Ventia Impostoris'. GUARDS ๐Ÿ’‚๐Ÿฏ: laughing ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ฐ

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