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2021-04-12 21:50

Sus. Well, in all seriousness, I haven't been this invested in a story for quite a while. This story leaves me wondering what's next; it makes me think, and it immerses me more effectively than a lot of the stories I've read. I actually feel like I can cheer Matt on, because I find myself excited for him. The author executes emotional parts super effectively, too; I rarely ever feel anything meaningful from stories, but this one pulled those feelings from me. Excited to see what's next.

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PILATE: What's ๐Ÿ˜ฆ so... funny ๐Ÿ˜‚ about ๐Ÿ’ฆ 'Sussus Amongus'? CENTURION: Well ๐Ÿ˜ฆ, it's a joke ๐Ÿ˜‚ name ๐Ÿ“›, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ. PILATE: I ๐Ÿ‘ have a vewy ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ gweat ๐Ÿ‘ fwiend ๐Ÿ‘‰ in Wome ๐Ÿ›๐Ÿšจ called โ˜ 'Sussus Amongus'. GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #4 ๐Ÿ’ฆ: chuckling PILATE: Silence ๐Ÿ”‡! What is all ๐Ÿ’ฏ this insolence โ—? You ๐Ÿ‘ˆ will find ๐Ÿ”Žโ„ yourself in gladiator ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป school ๐Ÿซ vewy ๐Ÿ˜Ÿ quickly ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’จ with wotten behavior ๐Ÿ—ฏ like ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽˆ that. BRIAN ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ‘ฆ: Can I ๐Ÿ‘ go ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿšด now, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ? slap ๐Ÿ‘‹ Aaah ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ‘‰! Eh ๐Ÿ’ฉ. PILATE: Wait โŒš till ๐Ÿ”ฅ Sussus Amongus hears ๐Ÿ‘‚ of this. GUARD ๐Ÿ‘ฎโ€โ™‚๏ธ #4 ๐Ÿ’ฆ: chuckling PILATE: Wight โœ…! Take ๐Ÿ‘Š him ๐Ÿ‘ด away ๐Ÿ˜! CENTURION: Oh ๐Ÿ™€, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ, he ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿฟ-- he ๐Ÿ‘ฅ only-- PILATE: No ๐Ÿ™…, no ๐Ÿ˜ฃ. I ๐Ÿ‘ want ๐Ÿ˜‹ him ๐Ÿ‘ด fighting ๐ŸฅŠ๐Ÿ“• wabid, wild ๐Ÿป animals ๐Ÿ˜บ within ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ…ฐ a week ๐Ÿ—“. CENTURION: Yes โœ…, sir ๐Ÿ‘จ. Come ๐Ÿ’ฆ on ๐Ÿ”›, you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ. GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #4 ๐Ÿ’ฆ: Ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ haa ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿคฃ, ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿ˜‚ ha ๐Ÿ˜‚. Hooo ๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿผ hooo ๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿผ hoo ๐ŸŽฃ hoo ๐ŸŽฃ. Hoo ๐Ÿ‘Œ hoo ๐Ÿ‘Œ... PILATE: I ๐Ÿ‘ will not have my fwiends ๐Ÿ‘ฅ widiculed by the common ๐Ÿฉ soldiewy ๐Ÿ’‚โ€โ™€๏ธ. Anybody ๐Ÿ‘ง๐Ÿ‘ด๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘จ else ๐Ÿ˜ฉ feel ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜œ like ๐Ÿ˜„ a little ๐Ÿ‘Œ... giggle ๐Ÿ˜‚... when ๐Ÿ‘ I ๐Ÿ‘ mention ๐Ÿ‘„ my fwiend ๐Ÿ‘‰... Sussus... GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚๐Ÿฏ #1 โ—: chuckling PILATE: ...Amongus? GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #1 โ—: chuckling PILATE: What about ๐Ÿ’ฆ you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ? Do you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ find ๐Ÿ”Ž it... wisible... when โฐ I ๐Ÿ‘ say ๐Ÿ’ฌ the name ๐Ÿ“›๐Ÿ˜‚... 'Sussus'... GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #3 ๐Ÿ–ฑ: chuckle ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜† PILATE: ...'Amongus'? GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #1 ๐ŸŽ„ and GUARD ๐Ÿ’‚ #2 ๐Ÿ•: chuckling PILATE: He ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿพโ€โš–๏ธ has a wife ๐Ÿ‘ฐ, you ๐Ÿ‘ˆ๐Ÿป know ๐Ÿค”. You ๐Ÿ‘ˆ know ๐Ÿค” what she's ๐Ÿ‘ฉ๐Ÿฝ called ๐Ÿ“ž? She's ๐Ÿ‘ง called ๐Ÿ“ฒ... 'Ventia'. 'Ventia Impostoris'. GUARDS ๐Ÿ’‚๐Ÿฏ: laughing ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ฐ

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