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chanduyLv33yr
2022-01-11 20:03

i usually do not pic historical dramas as i don't like myself to get frustrated. but i picked this one seing the tags but after reading 200 plus chapters, i understand that i was mislead. first its not rebirth, being unconscious/coma and roaming for a few months is not rebirth. i mean rebirth tag for webnovels, not literal meaning. there is no faceslapping as well. too much drama and sadness which is not my cup of tea. I was expecting face slapping so i did not expect it to be too tragic. I would like to read a mixed one, like some emotional scenes then some fun part, action etc. also the misunderstanding was dragged too much that it became annoying. because not a single character talks and leads to misunderstanding. nobody bothers to explain, especially the couple and second couple. if there is a creative misunderstanding, then it is understandable but here most of them are due miscommunication and dragged for long, still not a single thing is cleared. clearly several opportunities were there but it appeared deliberated so as to give mystery vibe. i doubt most readers will drop in the middle because of this. i because we have to wait for updates is one thing and too much dragging will lead to frustration. even while Bing reading i felt that. now pros of the novel, very nice plot and writing style is very good for except the things above. explaining of the emotions is too good and i loved it. grammar mistakes are minimal to zero in most chapters. though misunderstanding is dragged and annoying, the plot is captivating. i will buy another 50 chapters to see how it goes, because i read for entertainment and release my stress. if the sadness continues and misunderstandings are not cleared then i will drop. though its only around 10 to 20 percent, still there are a few sweet scenes. seing the writing talent of the author, I really wished to have read a more entertaining novel than sadness or at least a mixed one.

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Ada_5253Author

Thanks for the review. If you want to know why the tag is rebirth, please Read it until ch 300, you will get to know. Faceslapping is also around these chapters and sweet scens are also ongoing. I appreciate whatever you pointed out. Thanks

chanduyLv3

sure dear, I will then change my reviews . thank you 😊

Ada_5253:Thanks for the review. If you want to know why the tag is rebirth, please Read it until ch 300, you will get to know. Faceslapping is also around these chapters and sweet scens are also ongoing. I appreciate whatever you pointed out. Thanks
Ada_5253Author

It's okay. I can actually see whatever you have pointed out. However, it was my first time to write a story 😅. I thought that world building is very important but then I concentrated more on that. I am still learning. I appreciate whatever you have pointed out as it will help me in the near future when I will write. Thanks ❤️

chanduy:sure dear, I will then change my reviews . thank you 😊
chanduyLv3

the reason why i typed so much on mobile is that, it doesn't seem like it is your first time. i saw you mentioned it on comments, but your writing skills are beautiful that i did not feel like i am reading an author's first novel. so i decided to point out and i have seen that you care about your reader's opinion. I have been reading tons of literature and if i point out usually what readers would like, it would be helpful and we can get what we want too... win win... wish you best of luck dear 😘. I also liked the fact that you kept the ml clean even if the story is historical drama. its rare... I wish it could be same for second ml too... but it is hard in this kind of background. I too hate gender biase. thank you.

Ada_5253:It's okay. I can actually see whatever you have pointed out. However, it was my first time to write a story 😅. I thought that world building is very important but then I concentrated more on that. I am still learning. I appreciate whatever you have pointed out as it will help me in the near future when I will write. Thanks ❤️
Ada_5253Author

chanduy:the reason why i typed so much on mobile is that, it doesn't seem like it is your first time. i saw you mentioned it on comments, but your writing skills are beautiful that i did not feel like i am reading an author's first novel. so i decided to point out and i have seen that you care about your reader's opinion. I have been reading tons of literature and if i point out usually what readers would like, it would be helpful and we can get what we want too... win win... wish you best of luck dear 😘. I also liked the fact that you kept the ml clean even if the story is historical drama. its rare... I wish it could be same for second ml too... but it is hard in this kind of background. I too hate gender biase. thank you.
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I’ll be honest here. I really liked this story the first time I read it. Even though I did not like Xi Ying at the beginning you eventually get to appreciate him a bit by the end. To me how he treated Li Rui was unforgivable no matter what, but I also did understand that they’re meant to be. The thing is I have read the book three times now and some things still do not set well with me till now. Whatever one may say you can’t refute the fact the Rui’s parents were not a good parents. They did not even believe her when the incident took place nor did they try to investigate what happened. Her father literally used his own daughter to protect his wife because in his eyes she was more important. He could not stand to see his wife in distress and unhappy, so he decided to sacrifice his daughter’s happiness for hers. Her mother is no better, until the end she could not even tell that most of the problems occurring in her daughters life and her family are related to her. Even Xi Ying said that she was a very stupid woman to not be able to see all of this. The emperor loving her was not her fault we all agree about that. But how could she not see that her daughter was the collateral of her naivety?? It’s because she’s how she’s that her husband dare take big measures without telling her. To me it’s like she was the real heroine of the story. All her life she got to be carefree and loved by everyone without having to worry about anything, while everybody else had to suffer and take the brunt of the stick for her to get a ressemble of happiness. I also believe that Yi Junjie deserved his chance with Rui. I know I said that Ying and Rui were meant to be, but I would have loved to see an alternate life where Rui and Junjie got a happy ending (that’s just a wishful thinking). The love of Junjie was more realistic and appealed to me a big time. He really did his best for Rui, be it before the incident, during the 4 years and after. As for Zhang Wei and Huiqin can’t say much about them. Was more engrossed in Xi-Li story. Sorry for the long rant just wanted share my thoughts.🙏

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