i usually do not pic historical dramas as i don't like myself to get frustrated. but i picked this one seing the tags but after reading 200 plus chapters, i understand that i was mislead. first its not rebirth, being unconscious/coma and roaming for a few months is not rebirth. i mean rebirth tag for webnovels, not literal meaning. there is no faceslapping as well. too much drama and sadness which is not my cup of tea. I was expecting face slapping so i did not expect it to be too tragic. I would like to read a mixed one, like some emotional scenes then some fun part, action etc. also the misunderstanding was dragged too much that it became annoying. because not a single character talks and leads to misunderstanding. nobody bothers to explain, especially the couple and second couple. if there is a creative misunderstanding, then it is understandable but here most of them are due miscommunication and dragged for long, still not a single thing is cleared. clearly several opportunities were there but it appeared deliberated so as to give mystery vibe. i doubt most readers will drop in the middle because of this. i because we have to wait for updates is one thing and too much dragging will lead to frustration. even while Bing reading i felt that. now pros of the novel, very nice plot and writing style is very good for except the things above. explaining of the emotions is too good and i loved it. grammar mistakes are minimal to zero in most chapters. though misunderstanding is dragged and annoying, the plot is captivating. i will buy another 50 chapters to see how it goes, because i read for entertainment and release my stress. if the sadness continues and misunderstandings are not cleared then i will drop. though its only around 10 to 20 percent, still there are a few sweet scenes. seing the writing talent of the author, I really wished to have read a more entertaining novel than sadness or at least a mixed one.
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LIKEsure dear, I will then change my reviews . thank you 😊
It's okay. I can actually see whatever you have pointed out. However, it was my first time to write a story 😅. I thought that world building is very important but then I concentrated more on that. I am still learning. I appreciate whatever you have pointed out as it will help me in the near future when I will write. Thanks ❤️
the reason why i typed so much on mobile is that, it doesn't seem like it is your first time. i saw you mentioned it on comments, but your writing skills are beautiful that i did not feel like i am reading an author's first novel. so i decided to point out and i have seen that you care about your reader's opinion. I have been reading tons of literature and if i point out usually what readers would like, it would be helpful and we can get what we want too... win win... wish you best of luck dear 😘. I also liked the fact that you kept the ml clean even if the story is historical drama. its rare... I wish it could be same for second ml too... but it is hard in this kind of background. I too hate gender biase. thank you.