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rishi547
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2021-08-11 00:41

I don't understand all these people asking for more, every time I read this I fall asleep cos of how little development there is and how boring it is. Background is legit taken from elsewhere and it still fails to add to it. Sure multiple chapters a week, translated but god is it a slog. Honestly for a fan fic, don't waste your time, read something better.

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rishi547
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I don't know how web novel thought I gave this 2.5 stars when I rated character development, plot and the writing a ability at 1*. Chapter stability at a 5* simply because of how good the translation team is. And 3* for world building, since they are using a pre established world. For the record webnovel, my average for this entire slog is 2*

Zenos_Maxima2611
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I'm a little curious about your value in world-building and you say "use an existing world" which I assume is marvel and dc. do you know what fanfic is? the basis of fanfic is "use an existing world" so if you hate fanfic with "use an existing world" I hope you read the original novel, and I feel that your review is useless or nonsense because this is just a translation, not the work of the author "Bingefic". And As for the plot and MC characters, what do you expect from a part-time Chinese author? Chinese novels are of course full of plot holes, brain dead mc, excess arrogance, cunning, and other eastern nonsense. Well, even though I'm Asian, Southeast Asia to be exact. I hate most Chinese novels.

rishi547:I don't know how web novel thought I gave this 2.5 stars when I rated character development, plot and the writing a ability at 1*. Chapter stability at a 5* simply because of how good the translation team is. And 3* for world building, since they are using a pre established world. For the record webnovel, my average for this entire slog is 2*
rishi547
rishi547Lv2

I see what you are saying, and there are some genuinely alright Chinese novels that balance that arrogance with an actual plot. But this ain't it chief. Its fair this has nothing on the guy translating but all I'm saying is if you want to read something worth your time skip this. If you want to waste your time behind another trash fix that is popular somehow probably because its based in the marvel universe, well this'll do ya.

Zenos_Maxima2611:I'm a little curious about your value in world-building and you say "use an existing world" which I assume is marvel and dc. do you know what fanfic is? the basis of fanfic is "use an existing world" so if you hate fanfic with "use an existing world" I hope you read the original novel, and I feel that your review is useless or nonsense because this is just a translation, not the work of the author "Bingefic". And As for the plot and MC characters, what do you expect from a part-time Chinese author? Chinese novels are of course full of plot holes, brain dead mc, excess arrogance, cunning, and other eastern nonsense. Well, even though I'm Asian, Southeast Asia to be exact. I hate most Chinese novels.
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