Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Redemption Of A Reborn Soul

Overall this is recommended for readers of fantasy and reincarnation. Even though the first chapter had to begin with the protagonist dying (again) and reincarnating into a baby (again), at the very least it builds up the character as the chapters keep on going, and the Alystar keeps on developing in this whole new world. Some people might think the early chapters at first "here we go again" with the reincarnation stuff, but from my experience, as long as the author can make it different, then it's fine. The author here has succeeded in making the reincarnation their own unique take on it. However, my confusion was the sudden change of POV in Chapters 3 to 4, why were they in third person? You could have told those two chapters from Alystar's perspective, so it'll be consistent with the first two chapters and then chapter 5 onwards. World building is decent, there's some good ideas here and there, hopefully we can possibly see a new fantasy race, because that hasn't really appeared in fantasy in general (Webnovel/paperback books). Keep on writing author.