Review Detail of hkkhkjkj in Reincarnation in Endless Universe:Part 1 One Piece
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Author's 5 star shameless rating, nothing surprising here. I was going to make a random comment and leave, but this is a good chance to introduce my novel to people who might decide to read it, so... Things you should expect from this book: 1- MC, Character development. 2-Original Characters( Lots and lots of it) 3-Plot will stray from canon, because... mc will kind of destroy the canon. 4-Action/Adventure. Mc will be OP later on, but he won't cheat his way up. 5-I plan to write romance later on but there won't be a harem. 6-This book will contain some dark stuff(corruption,slavery,torture, major character deaths, etc...) so you shouldn't read it if you are affected by this kind of stuff. Thx for reading, hope you enjoy reading this story as much as I like writing it :)
Reincarnation in Endless Universe:Part 1 One Piece
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Thanks for the review! There will be more love interest in other worlds later on but I plan 1 for each world, sorry :( As for the OC thing, I agree with you. There will be canon characters appearing from next arc onwards. And I won't write much OC when MC enters Grand Line. First arc is to mainly develop MC's and some other important OC's character. Even if you won't read this story thanks for giving it a try and giving me my first review :)
Ryofu:Well thanks for the honesty, I'll personally not read it due to the "won't be a harem". In the One Piece world, and seeing the title I deduce that there are more universe later on, a single love make things bland and prevent the development of many women that could benefit from it xD. For the OC, be carful about that, it's easier to make people interested in character they know and that exist than OC. Too many OC make the story lose a huge part of its attraction since, for example on my part, I can care for a few of them but if there are too many I lose interest, I don't want to learn about them when there are enough secondary character in One Piece, or other world, to develop (development that can lead to replace OC for example).
Well thanks for the honesty, I'll personally not read it due to the "won't be a harem". In the One Piece world, and seeing the title I deduce that there are more universe later on, a single love make things bland and prevent the development of many women that could benefit from it xD. For the OC, be carful about that, it's easier to make people interested in character they know and that exist than OC. Too many OC make the story lose a huge part of its attraction since, for example on my part, I can care for a few of them but if there are too many I lose interest, I don't want to learn about them when there are enough secondary character in One Piece, or other world, to develop (development that can lead to replace OC for example).
I totally think the opposite with harem leaves everything so saturated with women that you end up forgetting characters, and the development of the novel is shallow and meaningless
Ryofu:Well thanks for the honesty, I'll personally not read it due to the "won't be a harem". In the One Piece world, and seeing the title I deduce that there are more universe later on, a single love make things bland and prevent the development of many women that could benefit from it xD. For the OC, be carful about that, it's easier to make people interested in character they know and that exist than OC. Too many OC make the story lose a huge part of its attraction since, for example on my part, I can care for a few of them but if there are too many I lose interest, I don't want to learn about them when there are enough secondary character in One Piece, or other world, to develop (development that can lead to replace OC for example).