Welcome back. I'm glad Abel managed to tame that book. She seems overpowered(Well, since she keeps calling Abel mortal, I assume she is a literal goddess lol). I wonder what he will gain from the ring once he tames it.

Very confusing indeed. There are other confusing parts too.

I have a feeling this cursed book will be very overpowered later on. İt is also kinda spooky. İs it feeding from people's pain?

I can imagine Franky being a revolutionary and trolling the missions. The ring is also interesting. İs it trying to control Abel?

Author-san, you are getting better at trolling. This worries me deeply. Thx for the chapter [img=update]

Very weird mc... Story is also very weird, even the system itself is weird. However the story keeps getting better as I get to know MC's personality more. Anyways it is a decent read, 5 stars to author for writing something unique I have never read before. Be warned though, mc's personality is very weird he is like prideful,carefree,cautious, shameless at the same time. He is also a little crazy in my humble opinion.

'Congrulatons host for maxing out passive skill: Shamelessness'

Author, you trolled me well with this one. I was like wtf before I realized mc was dreaming.

I guess MC is a softie towards children

Thx for the chapter.

Mc is very interesting... Can't get a handle on his personality. He is very casual about everything. I feel like he can do anything xd.

Thank you so much for taking the time to correct me :) I am really grateful. I will correct these chapters in a few days, when I have the time. Thx for helping me out :)

They might not trust it, thinking of it as a mere prank. So it is safer if he goes and does the convincing part.

Not really. He is a little dense in romance area, but I don't plan any harem.

Well, I am not trying to copy anyone at all. I like her, so I want to write about her. Also she will be important for something else too. I am sorry if you don't like it, but she will be part of my story.

He will :)

Thanks for the rewiev. Main Character will leave the marines after an event in this current volume and form his own group.

Thanx for your comment! İt is really rare for me to get comments :) Main Character will leave the marines soon because of some event that will happen in this arc and form his own group.

Thanks for the review! There will be more love interest in other worlds later on but I plan 1 for each world, sorry :( As for the OC thing, I agree with you. There will be canon characters appearing from next arc onwards. And I won't write much OC when MC enters Grand Line. First arc is to mainly develop MC's and some other important OC's character. Even if you won't read this story thanks for giving it a try and giving me my first review :)

Author's 5 star shameless rating, nothing surprising here. I was going to make a random comment and leave, but this is a good chance to introduce my novel to people who might decide to read it, so... Things you should expect from this book: 1- MC, Character development. 2-Original Characters( Lots and lots of it) 3-Plot will stray from canon, because... mc will kind of destroy the canon. 4-Action/Adventure. Mc will be OP later on, but he won't cheat his way up. 5-I plan to write romance later on but there won't be a harem. 6-This book will contain some dark stuff(corruption,slavery,torture, major character deaths, etc...) so you shouldn't read it if you are affected by this kind of stuff. Thx for reading, hope you enjoy reading this story as much as I like writing it :)