Review Detail of LordSputnik in There was the sunset

The Good: Excellent writing quality overall. The details given to each scene really helps build everything up around the characters. While the FL appears to be a very common trope, she is still given enough substance to stand on her own. I also like a romance that doesn't read like a romance. The Bad: The switching from first-person to third-person POV and back is a bit annoying. I feel like it's just angels and vampires on whatever planet they're on, presumably earth, is there supposed to be humans too? I may have missed it honestly. The Neutral: The author makes the FL come across as a young and naïve angel, but then they make it sound like she is the reason the angels came down in the first place. At least, that is how I read it and found it kind of confusing. Good job and I look forward to more chapters.